Thank you for posting a picture, you have no idea how much it helps identifying the problem...
1. the pictures are amphipods like Jaguar said.
2. FW dip really doesn't do a whole lot
3. the problem might be the change in environment. PC lights are very weak and I don't know what lighting they are in right now. If you also have pc lighting, then it could be that these palys are not getting enough lights and they're withering away. If you have lights stronger than PC and they're exposed to a huge change all of a sudden, then they could bleach out, which looks like it in the picture.
4. the short tentacles could mean a couple of things, the first thing I can think of is water flow. the next thing is Nudis eating them.
5. Overall, IMHO, I think the water condition is just not right for those palys, and as far as how to fix it... well, trial and error I suppose.
6. you can still check for preditors by doing dips: http://www.dfwmas.org/Forums/viewtopic.php?t=30746